EASEL OF Dan dos Santos
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dvpalumbo on July 8, 2018 at 10:42 pm
#1 is my first dot, #2 is trying to draw in that same spot by placing the pencil tip over it
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dvpalumbo on July 8, 2018 at 10:43 pm
2nd try
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howardlyon on July 8, 2018 at 11:34 pm -
Dan dos Santos on July 9, 2018 at 3:19 am -
KohseArt on September 28, 2018 at 2:27 pmLooks like a girl I had a crush on in high school. She cursed me.
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Note: need to be able to edit crits so when I suck less, I can come back and change that last statement.
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Dan dos Santos
Award Winning Illustrator, and Founder of Muddy Colors, and Sit & Crit.
I am open to critique
I WOULD LIKE HELP WITH
Learning to paint more like Justin Gerard
too litte bees in this pic. Should be more bees
Just testing, though what are those two dots on the right side of her hair?
Those were beads from her feathered earring breaking off. The earrings are a common theme in those covers.
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If you wanna be more like Justin Gerard, then you definitely need more dragons. I added one lurking in the background for dramatic tension. Also you need more smoke. And a lot more yellow. A lot more. Keep trying! I know you can do it!