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'Gogmagog' Illustration for myth story.

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'Boudica' illustration for legend

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'The Detective' Book cover illustration for detective story. (self-initiated project)

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   SarahFinnigan on August 3, 2018 at 3:57 pm

   Hi! I’m sorry I don’t have any significant crit at this time- I just wanted to say that I thought your art had great color palettes and did a good job of rewarding the viewer for sticking around.

   The only thing I noticed was that more might have been done with the smoke from the cigarette…it is very interesting on its own in how it is depicted, but as an overall shape, it just goes upward where it’s shape might have been used to add a little bit more movement.

   Awesome stuff!

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   SarahFinnigan on August 3, 2018 at 4:19 pm

   

   Hi! I’m sorry I don’t have any significant crit at this time- I just wanted to say that I thought you had great color palettes and did a good job of rewarding the viewer for sticking around with intriguing details that gave more context!

   The only thing I noticed was that more might have been done with the smoke from the cigarette…it is very interesting on its own in how it is depicted, but as an overall shape, it just goes upward where it’s shape might have been used to add a little bit more movement. I did a terrible approximation with my finger on my phone…
   Awesome stuff!

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     carlydraws on August 3, 2018 at 5:45 pm

     Thank you Sarah! I appreciate your comments, and you make a good point about the smoke.

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