EASEL OF Pierluigi Abbondanza
Pierluigi Abbondanza
Freelance illustrator and photographer
I am open to critique
I WOULD LIKE HELP WITH
Hi everyone, this is a painting I created for a story that I have written. Would like to hear any kind pf critique about it to see if there's something that need to be fixed. Thank you.
https://www.instagram.com/pitturadigitale/
Hi! Could you please explain what “PF” means?
Without knowing what the story is about and what the purpose of the illustration is, my feedback is a bit limited. I think the color palette is nice and I like the way you have painted the face. The piece is pretty clearly divided between a light space and a dark space and my eye doesn’t really know where to go around the piece after I view her face. I like how you have a shadow or branch or something breaking up the light space a bit along with some abstract value & texture variations. There seems to be something else being depicted, though I’m not sure what it is (is she against a tree? Is that foliage or snow on the right?). So my feedback is to clarify the surroundings and flesh out other story-telling elements some more.
Oh, I just realized “pf” was probably just a typo. 😛