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Abbi on August 2, 2018 at 2:36 pm
Not sure if it’s cool to leave crits from another table, but I’m over at the portrait table and liked your image. 🙂 Personally, I think this is strong, but could definitely use some punches of darker values. I think it would add a lot of drama if you choose either the figure or the background to go a lot darker.
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CandraH on August 3, 2018 at 9:27 amI’m also at a different table, returning a crit. Hope this is okay guys?
There’s not much to go on with this yet so I’ll just wait a little to see where you go with it. Good luck 🙂
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mpMann on August 3, 2018 at 12:53 pmI’m on Table 16 (C’mon by) and figure that since you’re allowed to drop comments at other tables it must be fine to do. I agree with Abbi that the values could be pushed further. And I would like to see just a bit more of what’s happening with the face, (which value could help reveal.)
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Alex Green
An aspiring traditional painter. Oil is focus, watercolor for fun. Canadian.
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Trying to move this one forward
Much more dramatic! I like it!
That foot is a thing of beauty.
I notice that when attempting that same gesture with my own hand, my little finger doesn’t like to hold itself straight. Instead, it’s a bit bent. I wonder if that adjustment might give this mage’s hand a little more life?
Might just be me, with my hands tuning crone-like at the ripe age of 31. 🙂