EASEL OF Jacob Sweet

"The Black Thorne" Acrylic on paper & digital A personal piece for Brandon Sanderson's Oathbringer.

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Cerino on August 1, 2018 at 4:12 pm

Hi! Awesome peace.
The one thing I would change is the blue reflections on the jaw and chin. The fact that there is local color makes it pou up too much, and takes awaay the efect of the blue light coming out of the suit.
And maybe darken the eywe
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- JacobASweet on August 3, 2018 at 7:25 pm
  
  Thanks Cerino! I’ll try those suggestions out. Thanks for taking the time. ;D
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AlSirois on August 7, 2018 at 3:55 pm

I’m sitting at another table, but hey — if this thing allows us to critique other tables, so be it! Anyway, I disagree with Cerino’s remark about the reflected blue light. To me, that’s part of what this piece work. It reminds me of some of Kelly Freas’s work. Good composition and layout, and the little splash of red above the guy’s head really adds to the overall effect.
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AlSirois on August 7, 2018 at 3:55 pm

I’m sitting at another table, but hey — if this thing allows us to critique other tables, so be it! Anyway, I disagree with Cerino’s remark about the reflected blue light. To me, that’s part of what makes this piece work. It reminds me of some of Kelly Freas’s work. Good composition and layout, and the little splash of red above the guy’s head really adds to the overall effect.
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