I think the individual elements are each fairly intriguing in a way, but I don’t feel like there’s enough going on between the elements to create much of a story in the viewers head. Maybe if you were to position the characters so that it looks like the towering dishes could fall on the main character, and like maybe the pig horse…rabbit…things, were distracting each other? I think that would bring it from a nice sketch to something that is telling more of an engaging story. Looks good!
I think the individual elements are each fairly intriguing in a way, but I don’t feel like there’s enough going on between the elements to create much of a story in the viewers head. Maybe if you were to position the characters so that it looks like the towering dishes could fall on the main character, and like maybe the pig horse…rabbit…things, were distracting each other? I think that would bring it from a nice sketch to something that is telling more of an engaging story. Looks good!