Very nice color and good composition. The right forearme seems well drawn to me.
I think however there may be some drawing issues : the eyebrows of the girl seems strongly assymetric which seems unnatural, her left leg (on the right of the canvas) seems to me a bit too long, the left arm a bit too high (the scapula should move when crossing the arms). I think it lacks the cast shadow of the girl on the ground and on the lion (whithout it, she may seems a bit “diconnected” from the ground). Maybe the line of her back could be more curved. The ears of the lion doesn’t feel quite symmetric to me (but maybe lions can move them independantly and so …). Maybe there is a bit too much contrast between the ground and her boots (unless you want to draw attention to the boots which is then consistant with the red color)
I hope that helps !
Looking for any feedback or advice on this piece 🙂
Very nice color and good composition. The right forearme seems well drawn to me.
I think however there may be some drawing issues : the eyebrows of the girl seems strongly assymetric which seems unnatural, her left leg (on the right of the canvas) seems to me a bit too long, the left arm a bit too high (the scapula should move when crossing the arms). I think it lacks the cast shadow of the girl on the ground and on the lion (whithout it, she may seems a bit “diconnected” from the ground). Maybe the line of her back could be more curved. The ears of the lion doesn’t feel quite symmetric to me (but maybe lions can move them independantly and so …). Maybe there is a bit too much contrast between the ground and her boots (unless you want to draw attention to the boots which is then consistant with the red color)
I hope that helps !