EASEL OF Olaf Tollefsen

Portrait with black and pink

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   mpMann on August 13, 2018 at 12:42 pm

   I like the style here. Perhaps a little more detail is called for in the eyes and mouth, that is to say, more of an expression for us to read might make for a more commanding image.

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Portrait with blue

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This is my most recent piece. Any feedback would be great!

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   mpMann on August 13, 2018 at 12:40 pm

   This appears to be more graphically conventional than your other two pieces. The lop sidedness of the purple head doesn’t come across as deliberate. It appears to need correction, as there are basic alignment issues with it. One the whole I prefer the other two pictures.

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     Olaf on August 17, 2018 at 1:42 pm

     Thanks Mpmann. I appreciate the feedback.

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