EASEL OF Tamires Pará
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AlSirois on August 7, 2018 at 4:02 pmThis one works better for me than the gray guy, because in the three-quarters view I can more easily see how the howdah on the orc’s back fits on there. Nice attention to detaii, and a good color scheme. I think some of this dude’s personality comes through.
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Hi everyone! I've been trying to focus more on building a portfolio for character design and I wanted your feedback specifically in terms of shape language, silhouette, storytelling and overall visual hierarchy of the images. Pointing out flaws in the fundamentals is okay as well, although not my focus at the moment.
Hi Tamires! Your work is great in these characters. I have very little to say regarding the things you asked for help, but I’ll try with the bits I know!
Comparing both characters, this is the one that I can see less storytelling. I think it’s because I can’t see how the triangle object is attached to the character, neither for what it’s used. It’d be also be nice to see his personality in a more dynamic pose!
Other thing I see in this one is that the warm light seems a little bit out of place, but I don’t know exactly why, maybe it’s too warm comparing to the rest of the palette?
Also just a little change I would do is darken some shadow points around the image increasing contrast, specially the neck, the cheek is merging with it making a little difficult to see where one ends and the other begins.
Hope it helps!