EASEL OF Walter Louis
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AdrianNagorski on August 2, 2018 at 5:11 am
nice, like the sphinx
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is that a rider on the left? some one riding the prey mantis? I would alter the pose so its more side on and visible
and maybe leave it in silhouette form? kind of pulls all my attention to this instead of the middle of the page
the dragon flies in the background scale needs to become smaller due to distance
i like it
you have quite a lot of empty far far background space on the left , maybe duplicate the right pyramids in that space except a lot smaller?
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It's for a Sci Fi project in Moebius' Style. Heavily inspired by Frank Herbert and Philip K. Dick
Everything in this seems to be of similar scale and detail, so it all just sort of feels like its lined up in a row. Simply varying the size and locations of the three men would be enough to give greater depth of field and a more interesting composition.